Rough Metal Song Demo-Opinions?

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  1. CannibalKiller

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    hey guys, i know im probably not very popular round here-dafuq is necrotrolling?:scratch: but i want your opinions on this.
    i wrote this a while back with a friend of mine (hes a drummer) and we might start a band. its guitar pro but you get the idea.
    what do you think?
    where can i improve songwriting wise?

    much appreciated, keep :shred:ing
     
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    cant believe i already need to bump this
     
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    Floppystrings No like the floppy

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    It reminds me of Anal Cunt.

    Some old Dillinger Escape Plan vocals might work.
     
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    -42- Nothing to see here

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    Tags: "ambient, prog, djent" :lol:

    Seriously though, some bands can hack by just throwing together riffs, but you should really try and write something more cohesive. It's tough for me to have an opinion on such a rough cut demo though, so my only recommendation at this point is to rerecord it with an actual guitar, and find a vocalist.
     

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