Mix/Composition Critique

danresn

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Hi guys, so I wrote a song called journey and it turned out it was a little long, 14 minutes in fact :hbang:. Anyway I just got actual monitors (Fostex 5s) for the first time so this is my first mix on them, the recording was already done on old computer speakers... yeah, dark days. So I split the song up into 3 pieces and would like your opinion on the mix/composition, since 14 minutes is a bit much to ask I'd be most interested in any opinions on part II as its the most full bandy.

Voyage Part II (Journey) by Dan Larsen on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

And just because

Voyage Part I (Departures) by Dan Larsen on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Voyage Part III (Absence) by Dan Larsen on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
 


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