Short prog fusion video!

Discussion in 'Live Performance & Stage Sound' started by Martis93, Jul 2, 2016.

  1. Martis93

    Martis93 SS.org Regular

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    Please excuse me for being blunt, but I'm pretty sure you won't win on this composition.

    I can most certainly hear what you're trying to express; however, there's just no real detectable melody to it as it stands now.
    There is a detectable progression to it, your way of arranging staccato notes is interesting and can be developed.
    I would suggest arranging longer notes in-between those, that is, alternate between the staccato and 'letting-out' the energy.
    This would also extend the arrangement which is way too short.

    Also, though such a competition is of course about the music, the visual part will have an impact on the viewer/listener, and you should create a more interesting video.
    Keep going at it, dude!
     

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