My logos

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  1. broj15

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    She seemed to catch on pretty quick but I just couldn't do it lol. I think after 10 minutes of failing I just said screw and went back practicing sweeps lol
     
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    ^Amen. When all else fails; sweep :hbang:
     
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    when in doubt, sweep it out
     
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    Did these for my band, Which one looks better?

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    I prefer the top one, second one might work better if there's a bit more contrast inside the letters; the top one draws the eye more (to me at least) because the background is solid and there's a pattern inside, but on the bottom it looks like it's just a hard outline with a little bit more opacity.
     
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    Nice work, but the designs look "designed" to me, rather than just naturally occurring. Like the Introvert design looks like it was done by an extrovert. And there are things going on that look random in some of them. I'd love to see you strip stuff out and make it less busy, so there aren't so many competing elements in the designs. Like black metal designs have only one or two things going on. They're messy and busy graphically, but thematically they're pretty tight and concise.
    Anyway, I share your love for logos, fonts, etc., so I'm just passing on some stuff I've learned. :yesway:
     
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    JStraitiff Melodic Mamma Jamma

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    Looks nice dude. I really love the Surrender your Vices logo. That one is definitely the best. Id want you to design a logo for my band once we come up with a name
     
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    @MFB I meant the whole arrangement altogether which looks better? But yeah I get what you are saying thanks :D

    And thanks guys! It really means a lot to me, especially the tips your trying to give me or little advise, I really appreciate that. You learn things from others whether you want to or not xD
     
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    The first one flows much better in my opinion. Although I would do some tweaking with the A.
     
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    iRaiseTheDead Ashes Of Rebirth

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    Any ideas my man?
     
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    Yeah, where the curve at the top starts it needs smoothed out on the left side so that it's a smoother line, same for in the middle of the curve.

    Everything else in the logo is smooth, so it just throws me off that the A has a lot of rough lines.
     
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    I've touched it up quite a bit more, I've been told it looks like Stick To Your Guns' old logo. I googled it and it looks pretty close :/
     
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    Yeah, I kinda assumed you had been inspired by that hahaha.
     
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    Well looking at it now... looks that way xD
     
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    Here is one I did for a promotion company :) REALLY proud of this one!

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    man you're getting so much better. keep up the great work!
     
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    Thank you so much <3 Kind words encourage me!
     
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    iRaiseTheDead Ashes Of Rebirth

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    First off, if a mod could rename this for me that would be perfect! "My Art"

    Here is a logo we've decided on as a band:

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    This is the first album/ep cover I made:

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    This is the second, I can see this as more of a hardcore cover, Emmure-inspired LOL

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    And this is my most recent that I am most proud of!:

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    I like the idea of the last cover, but it looks unconvincing; the depth-of-field is all over the place. I also hope it's stock/licensed photography you're using (especially if going to print/publication with any of these with photography).
     
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