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Old 08-24-2006, 01:22 PM   #1
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Tell me what you guys think....

AMANDA

Just wanted you to know...
you make me smile,
make me laugh...

Just wanted you to know
I love being near you...
I love looking into your eyes,
hearing your cute giggle...

Just wanted you to know
I am so glad you came into my life...
so glad we met...

I just wanted to tell you...
just in case you did not know.

EDIT:Had to touch up a word or two...should be a little better now!

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Old 08-24-2006, 01:34 PM   #2
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Thats for a girl right?

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Old 08-24-2006, 01:39 PM   #3
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Just wanted you to know...
you make me smile,
make me laugh...

Just wanted you to know
I love being near you...
I love looking into your eyes,
hearing you laugh...

Just wanted you to know
I am so glad you came into my life...
so glad we met...

I just wanted to tell you...
just in case you did not know.
Awwww you're gonna make me blush

More words here is more words.
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Old 08-24-2006, 01:40 PM   #4
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Thats for a girl right?

Ummm.....yes


Yeah, one of the ones I partied with this weekend. We've been hanging out every night since, talking on the phone all day, etc.....

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Old 08-24-2006, 01:44 PM   #5
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In the past, i've seen these things not go over that well. I dunno, but poetry hasn't worked around here since like, the 1700's


Cultural differences maybe

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Old 08-24-2006, 01:47 PM   #6
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Yeah, we have it and you don't

True, but I read her something else I wrote and she loved it. So I was kind of hoping to make her feel special and all that by writing her one.

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Old 08-24-2006, 01:54 PM   #7
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Fair enough. If that's what you're both into then there shouldn't be a problem.

All I know is in highschool, when someone wrote a girl poetry, I ended up with a girlfriend

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Old 08-24-2006, 01:54 PM   #8
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NLB, you're not gonna start posting about how many shoes you have in your closet....are you?

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Old 08-24-2006, 02:36 PM   #9
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NLB, you're not gonna start posting about how many shoes you have in your closet....are you?

Nope. But I will post about tips for shaving your legs and painting your nails

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Old 08-24-2006, 02:49 PM   #10
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True, but I read her something else I wrote and she loved it. So I was kind of hoping to make her feel special and all that by writing her one.
Dude, if she liked something else that you wrote, then she'll likely love this one. Best of luck. And hey, if it don't work out, you should have no problem landing a kick-ass job at Hallmark.
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Old 08-24-2006, 02:50 PM   #11
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That stuff can go over like a brick ....house, long as you don't overdo it. Make sure you show how hard and tough you are afterwords, and she should flip when she hears it.

Of course, in Scott's case, Canuck yetis, er... girls, obviously aren't going to appreciate poetry. They can barely deal with the English language as it is. Gotta stay simple with 'em. ...., they're still working on 'Goony goo goo.'

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Old 08-24-2006, 02:58 PM   #12
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Bite me, Wolf boy

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Old 08-24-2006, 02:59 PM   #13
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Babe, tomorrows so far away
Theres something I just have to say
I dont think I can hide what Im feelin inside
Another day, knowin I love you
And i, Im getting too close again
I dont want to see it end
If I tell you tonight will you turn out the light
And walk away knowin I love you?

Im gonna take you by surprise and make you realize,
Amanda
Im gonna tell you right away, I cant wait another day,
Amanda
Im gonna say it like a man and make you understand
Amanda
I love you

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Old 08-24-2006, 03:05 PM   #14
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Bite me, Wolf boy
What'sa matta! Poetry too syrupy for you!?!

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Old 08-24-2006, 03:07 PM   #15
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What happened to making fun of Canadians for their beavers, or polar bears or igloo's?

Get creative ....ers

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Old 08-24-2006, 03:10 PM   #16
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What happened to making fun of Canadians for their beavers, or polar bears
I thought I was. Canuck chicks, hello?

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Old 08-24-2006, 03:11 PM   #17
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What happened to making fun of Canadians for their beavers, or polar bears or igloo's?

Get creative ....ers
Because of Alaska we happen to have all of those things too
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Old 08-24-2006, 03:12 PM   #18
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That's about the most un- thing I've ever read.
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Old 08-24-2006, 03:14 PM   #19
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Joe dont you think Your Majesty will be very jealous? lmao j/k bud. Dude to be honest you should ask a female about it, you would get a better response but my opinion.... go from the heart.
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Old 08-24-2006, 03:15 PM   #20
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Because of Alaska we happen to have all of those things too

Please. Alaska is like Quebec. The rest of the country just pretends it's not there.


And bite me, Wolf boy

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Old 08-24-2006, 03:15 PM   #21
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In all honesty, as long as you don't come across clingy, she'll love it, I guarantee.

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Please. Alaska is like Quebec. The rest of the country just pretends it's not there.


And bite me, Wolf boy
Ooh, Scotty. RARRRRRR!

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Old 08-24-2006, 03:19 PM   #22
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Ooh, Scotty. RARRRRRR!

ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!! rep this .... guys!!!!!!
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Old 08-24-2006, 03:21 PM   #23
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Old 08-25-2006, 06:15 AM   #24
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Alright, so I read it to her last night. She loved it! Finally even got a kiss out of her

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Old 08-25-2006, 07:26 AM   #25
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Dind Ding Ding! A solid single!

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