New tune, work in progress

KholdStare · 05-27-2008, 04:31 PM

Hey everyone! I'm quite new here, as you can see, but so far I'm enjoying my stay

SUPER MEGA UPDATE!

Well, not so much...

Basically, I RE-recorded everything, and this time,
I used cab impulses on the pre-amp output of my F50. I'm very pleased with the results,
since I can get an excellent tone, without blowing up the building with my volume levels :laugh:

I've recorded the whole solo this time, and it resolves into a clean section...
I'm not entirely sure of the drum/rhythm-guitar/solo arrangement just before the transition,
please give feedback, if it's too wacky/doesn't fit/crap

Anyway, enough of my ramblings, have a listen:

Thanks so much for listening!

P.S. If you want to compare, the old mix is still there, at SoundClick artist: Tabula Rasa (CY) - Instrumental Progressive Melodic Metal

KholdStare · 05-30-2008, 04:19 PM

Come on guys, no comments? Pweeease? Pweetty pwease?

I understand it's not the normal Br00taLZ that you're used to, but please give
it a listen

Thanks.

Mattayus · 05-30-2008, 04:26 PM

I think the drums need to come a bit more, they're lacking punch. As is the rhythm guitar parts, more bass thud is needed there i think dude. That's for the production side of things anyway, as for the song, really loved it mate, nice stuff

KholdStare · 05-30-2008, 05:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mattayus

I think the drums need to come a bit more, they're lacking punch. As is the rhythm guitar parts, more bass thud is needed there i think dude. That's for the production side of things anyway, as for the song, really loved it mate, nice stuff

Hey, thanks so much for the comments! Gives me motivation to mess around with
the mix more

I'll try and fix the things you mentioned

UPDATE: Played about with the mix, and a new version is up now! This one is more punchy IMO, but might be a bit bass heavy... hmmm.
If you have anything to share (for example: "it sucks"), please do

british beef · 05-31-2008, 05:44 PM

sounds quite 30 seconds to mars, but thats a compliment cus i like them, but the mix is nice and full.

Ruins · 05-31-2008, 06:00 PM

in terms of production i can not say yet what is wrong with it but i think Matt is right.
nice melody and solo you need to continue it. it sounded like you just cut out few bars out of some long and cool song to post.
as bassist, what was that horrible empty bass? fender? (i dislike fender sound)

KholdStare · 05-31-2008, 08:48 PM

Thanks so much for the comments guys!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruins

in terms of production i can not say yet what is wrong with it but i think Matt is right.
nice melody and solo you need to continue it. it sounded like you just cut out few bars out of some long and cool song to post.
as bassist, what was that horrible empty bass? fender? (i dislike fender sound)

Yeah the song is "work in progress", so I cut it where I stopped recording

It will be a lot longer, I assure you

Haha, about the bass... I agree it sounds like crap, because it's just my guitar
pitch shifted an octave down

Wish I had a real bass...

I'll keep experimenting with the mix as I record more, so hopefully it will get better

Mattayus · 06-01-2008, 03:48 AM

That's much better dude, sounds really full. Fuckin sweet action

amonb · 06-01-2008, 05:26 AM

I didn't hear the original version but that song sounds awesome. Me likee a lot

Apophis · 06-01-2008, 12:18 PM

sounds really nice

05-27-2008, 04:31 PM	#1
KholdStare ss.org Regular Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 88 Rig: Mesa F-50 Thanked: 2	New tune, work in progress Hey everyone! I'm quite new here, as you can see, but so far I'm enjoying my stay SUPER MEGA UPDATE! Well, not so much... Basically, I RE-recorded everything, and this time, I used cab impulses on the pre-amp output of my F50. I'm very pleased with the results, since I can get an excellent tone, without blowing up the building with my volume levels :laugh: I've recorded the whole solo this time, and it resolves into a clean section... I'm not entirely sure of the drum/rhythm-guitar/solo arrangement just before the transition, please give feedback, if it's too wacky/doesn't fit/crap Anyway, enough of my ramblings, have a listen: Thanks so much for listening! P.S. If you want to compare, the old mix is still there, at SoundClick artist: Tabula Rasa (CY) - Instrumental Progressive Melodic Metal Last edited by KholdStare; 06-06-2008 at 06:14 PM. Reason: Song Update

05-30-2008, 04:26 PM	#3
Mattayus Sir Groove-A-Lot Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Cambridgeshire, UK Posts: 2,364 Real Name: Matt Main Seven: Ibanez RG7620GN Rig: Peavey Banditt 112 Thanked: 60	I think the drums need to come a bit more, they're lacking punch. As is the rhythm guitar parts, more bass thud is needed there i think dude. That's for the production side of things anyway, as for the song, really loved it mate, nice stuff www.soundclick.com/mattayus http://www.mysoundclinic.com

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05-30-2008, 04:19 PM	#2
KholdStare ss.org Regular Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 88 Rig: Mesa F-50 Thanked: 2	Come on guys, no comments? Pweeease? Pweetty pwease? I understand it's not the normal Br00taLZ that you're used to, but please give it a listen Thanks.

05-31-2008, 05:44 PM	#5
british beef ss.org Regular Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Bicester, Oxon, UK Posts: 74 Thanked: 3	sounds quite 30 seconds to mars, but thats a compliment cus i like them, but the mix is nice and full.

05-31-2008, 06:00 PM	#6
Ruins Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Germany Posts: 966 Real Name: Alex Main Seven: some crap. "dimavery" Rig: custom home made Thanked: 7	in terms of production i can not say yet what is wrong with it but i think Matt is right. nice melody and solo you need to continue it. it sounded like you just cut out few bars out of some long and cool song to post. as bassist, what was that horrible empty bass? fender? (i dislike fender sound)

06-01-2008, 03:48 AM	#8
Mattayus Sir Groove-A-Lot Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Cambridgeshire, UK Posts: 2,364 Real Name: Matt Main Seven: Ibanez RG7620GN Rig: Peavey Banditt 112 Thanked: 60	That's much better dude, sounds really full. Fuckin sweet action

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amonb Just One More... Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Brisbane Posts: 2,244 Real Name: Amon Main Seven: Ibanez s7420 BP Thanked: 14	I didn't hear the original version but that song sounds awesome. Me likee a lot

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Apophis ROTER CUSTOM GUITARS Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Poland Posts: 9,233 Real Name: Sebastian Main Seven: I need more strings :) Main ERG: RCG 9 & 10 string Rig: Line6 Thanked: 46	sounds really nice


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