Instrumental "Art" Piece I Made With Sibelius "Memories"

All_¥our_Bass · 01-28-2008, 02:41 PM

Well. What do you think? I know it's kinda wierd and unusual, but so is the nature of everything I do.

Sorry it's midi but I obviously dont own any upright basses, pianos, or an entire string section.

Dr. Von Goosewing · 01-28-2008, 04:35 PM

I think it's pretty awesome!

It could sound genuinely creepy if recorded with real instruments. Reminds me of Bartók & Resident Evil at the same time

All_¥our_Bass · 01-28-2008, 04:43 PM

Glad you like it. This is my first good use of polytonality (I'm a big fan of Stravinsky

). Not that I wrote it specifically to use polytonality, but I knew some of my ideas required it, and lastly I actually had an idea behind me the whole time. Sometimes (actually most of the time) I can't find an idea to compose around.

And in case your wondering it actually is based on my memories.

ShawnFjellstad · 01-28-2008, 04:43 PM

i like it. would sound way cooler with actual instruments.
which version of sibelius do you have?

All_¥our_Bass · 01-28-2008, 04:46 PM

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Originally Posted by ShawnFjellstad

i like it. would sound way cooler with actual instruments.
which version of sibelius do you have?

3

01-28-2008, 05:18 PM

Separate the "string section" into a 5 piece string section instead of having them all as chords.

I personally don't like the first upright bass part, it's to happy and repetitive for my taste. But it gets better later.
But if I can give it some advice; I would play it without a bow.

It sounds really good from about 2.45 and forward.

The long D-minor chord around 4 minutes would be nice with some small variation, I would move the 5th around a little.

All_¥our_Bass · 01-28-2008, 05:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Desecrated

Separate the "string section" into a 5 piece string section instead of having them all as chords.

Yeah I know what your saying about the string section. I'll admit I did the chord stuff for convience just to get my ideas down and didn't want all those staves to become obtrusive.

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I personally don't like the first upright bass part ... I would play it without a bow.

Sorry, I loves upright with bowing. To me pizzacato didn't seem right

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it's to happy and repetitive for my taste. But it gets better later.

The 'happy intro' is supposed to represent childhood. It's supposed to be kinda plain.

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It sounds really good from about 2.45 and forward.

Why thank you.

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The long D-minor chord around 4 minutes would be nice with some small variation, I would move the 5th around a little.

This isn't completly polished. I'll probably spice things up a bit make some improvments. I just wanted to write it all out in near-completeness before I lost the flame of inspiration. Which can be amazingly brief at times.

Thanks for listening.
Also you've got a really good ear. I didn't expect anyone to name off any notes or chords I used at all.

ShawnFjellstad · 01-29-2008, 05:51 AM

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Originally Posted by All_¥our_Bass

3

ah. 5 is the shit.
the stock midi sounds in 5 sound WAY better than 3.

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01-28-2008, 04:35 PM	#2
Dr. Von Goosewing No Djent Here... Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: UK Posts: 131 Real Name: Jared Main Seven: C7 Blackjack Rig: Waiting on a Mak2! Thanked: 4	I think it's pretty awesome! It could sound genuinely creepy if recorded with real instruments. Reminds me of Bartók & Resident Evil at the same time

01-28-2008, 04:43 PM	#3
All_¥our_Bass Hotter than Tifa!! Join Date: May 2006 Location: Sevenstring.org Posts: 1,784 Real Name: Nicholas Main Seven: I don't has yetz :'( Main ERG: Hello Kitty Squire Strat Rig: BP80->Drive CD 100B Thanked: 28	Glad you like it. This is my first good use of polytonality (I'm a big fan of Stravinsky ). Not that I wrote it specifically to use polytonality, but I knew some of my ideas required it, and lastly I actually had an idea behind me the whole time. Sometimes (actually most of the time) I can't find an idea to compose around. And in case your wondering it actually is based on my memories.

01-28-2008, 05:18 PM	#6
Desecrated Dirty Lurker Posts: n/a	Separate the "string section" into a 5 piece string section instead of having them all as chords. I personally don't like the first upright bass part, it's to happy and repetitive for my taste. But it gets better later. But if I can give it some advice; I would play it without a bow. It sounds really good from about 2.45 and forward. The long D-minor chord around 4 minutes would be nice with some small variation, I would move the 5th around a little.


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