[Korbain]

Heya its been a while since i've recorded anything, had a bit of dead zone in writing music for a while n couldn't make anything flow, but i finally did a new one lol. So yeh, just a NOTE, i am NOT! a good singer, i am learning, and trying my best too improve so bare with me on that part (though i don't think my vocals sounded too shabby in this ), other than that! check it out and give us some feed back Lets keep this constructive for my own self asteem here :p thanks heaps guys glad i can share this with my fellow 7 stringers here

MySpace.com - Korbain (New song up!!!!! Check it) - Sydney, New South Wales - Experimental / Metal / Metal - www.myspace.com/korbainmusic

Its the one that should start playing automatically when you open it "self deprivation"

[Apophis]

Quite nice, you have to work a bit about overall tone, but it's ok. It's interesting song and its musical structure

[Michael]

Cool song.

I can't sing at all so I can't really say anything too constructive. But your voice sounds like it's really coming along. I enjoyed listening to it.

[amonb]

Nice dude, and I wouldn't worry about the vocals that was a good job. Interesting tune!

[Korbain]

thanks heaps guys I am trying my best to just tighten up my writing style and vocals...so my goal is basically, every song, improve on the original in what i didn't like (as we all do :P), and yeh, my tone is a thing in the works at the moment, i've nearly got what i want. My vocals are gradually getting better lol someday! i may be able to sing I was a bit nervous about this one, because i did some different things in it, your thanks and input have been noted so i know what i am doing right and what i need to fix