New Fast(ish) Heavy Song \m/

B Lopez · 11-30-2007, 01:44 AM

Just finished this one not too long ago. I think this is my best one yet. Got me some heavy riffing going on

Tell me what ya think!

Called "Untitled 02" ...too burnt out to think of some vicious name for it atm, along with all the other ones

MySpace.com - Bobby [guitarist looking for metal band] - San Jose, California - Metal / Thrash / Metal - www.myspace.com/bobbylopezmetal

added to soundclick

SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal

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SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal

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SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal

TomAwesome · 11-30-2007, 03:55 AM

The mix sounds a little muffled and far away, so it's hard to hear what the guitars are doing clearly. Neat stuff, though!

amonb · 11-30-2007, 03:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TomAwesome

The mix sounds a little muffled and far away, so it's hard to hear what the guitars are doing clearly. Neat stuff, though!

Could that be Myspace doing it's "I'm gunna mess with your mp3 thing"?

Anyways some cool riffage! And I love how it mellowed out

Apophis · 11-30-2007, 04:43 AM

Quite nice, but as Tom said it could be better sounding

B Lopez · 11-30-2007, 10:43 AM

Thanks dudes.

Quote:

Originally Posted by amonb

Could that be Myspace doing it's "I'm gunna mess with your mp3 thing"?

That and I suck at recording so it doesn't help any.

Added a soundclick, maybe it'll sound better

7 Dying Trees · 11-30-2007, 11:20 AM

Less gain, and then tightly multitrack. Less gain will get rid of that top end scratchy fizz, plus it'll make it sound puchier.

B Lopez · 11-30-2007, 04:06 PM

Thanks 7DT, this is the result. I'm much happier

SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal

smueske · 11-30-2007, 04:27 PM

You know, the guitar part sounds great. The drums are really flat, though, and boxy sounding. If you improved the drum sound the track would really snap into place. My advice, for whatever it's worth is to work on compression, EQ, and reverb on the drums -- that will pull the guitar forward.

Digging it, tho!

B Lopez · 11-30-2007, 04:46 PM

Thanks. I dont really know how to do that stuff with ezdrummer though, so I'm out of luck atm unless you or someone else can help me.

Alright, I figured out the drums.

Yet another update:

SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal

smueske · 11-30-2007, 11:07 PM

That's a huge improvement! Now get some bass in there and you'll be whooping some ass!

Steve

amonb · 12-01-2007, 12:01 AM

Dude, that's kicking arse! The guitars seem to have lost a bit of presence since the original mix but the whole thing " sits" better!

B Lopez · 12-01-2007, 01:33 AM

Thanks.

Quote:

Originally Posted by smueske

That's a huge improvement! Now get some bass in there and you'll be whooping some ass!

Steve

Thanks. But there is bass in it

At least I'll know what to work on next.

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11-30-2007, 01:44 AM	#1
B Lopez Vescere bracis meis. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Killafornia Posts: 3,530 Thanked: 74 Feedback Score: 10 reviews	New Fast(ish) Heavy Song \m/ Just finished this one not too long ago. I think this is my best one yet. Got me some heavy riffing going on Tell me what ya think! Called "Untitled 02" ...too burnt out to think of some vicious name for it atm, along with all the other ones MySpace.com - Bobby [guitarist looking for metal band] - San Jose, California - Metal / Thrash / Metal - www.myspace.com/bobbylopezmetal added to soundclick SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal Updated soundclick SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal Another update SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal UNSCARED "...The person who has nothing for which he is willing to fight, nothing which is more important than his own personal safety is a miserable creature and has no chance of being free unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself." -J.S. Mill "The difference between a successful person and others is not a lack of strength, not a lack of knowledge, but rather a lack in will." -Vince Lombardi

11-30-2007, 03:55 AM	#2
TomAwesome I LIKE JUICE!!! Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 8,298 Thanked: 43 Feedback Score: 5 reviews	The mix sounds a little muffled and far away, so it's hard to hear what the guitars are doing clearly. Neat stuff, though! "Tom, you're like 1 part a serious dork, and 2 parts the most awesome ....ing guy ever." -

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7 Dying Trees Sarcy English Twat Join Date: May 2004 Location: 7th Ethereal Plane of interstellar hell, Innit Bruv, Safe, London, UK Posts: 8,869 Thanked: 139 Feedback Score: 41 reviews	Less gain, and then tightly multitrack. Less gain will get rid of that top end scratchy fizz, plus it'll make it sound puchier. The Chaos has come: www.chaosanct.com

11-30-2007, 04:06 PM	#7
B Lopez Vescere bracis meis. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Killafornia Posts: 3,530 Thanked: 74 Feedback Score: 10 reviews	Thanks 7DT, this is the result. I'm much happier SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal UNSCARED "...The person who has nothing for which he is willing to fight, nothing which is more important than his own personal safety is a miserable creature and has no chance of being free unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself." -J.S. Mill "The difference between a successful person and others is not a lack of strength, not a lack of knowledge, but rather a lack in will." -Vince Lombardi

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11-30-2007, 04:43 AM	#4
Apophis Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Poland Posts: 18,281 Thanked: 71 Feedback Score: 1 reviews	Quite nice, but as Tom said it could be better sounding

11-30-2007, 04:27 PM	#8
smueske ss.org Regular Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Midwest Posts: 591 Thanked: 6 Feedback Score: 0 reviews	You know, the guitar part sounds great. The drums are really flat, though, and boxy sounding. If you improved the drum sound the track would really snap into place. My advice, for whatever it's worth is to work on compression, EQ, and reverb on the drums -- that will pull the guitar forward. Digging it, tho!

11-30-2007, 04:46 PM	#9
B Lopez Vescere bracis meis. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Killafornia Posts: 3,530 Thanked: 74 Feedback Score: 10 reviews	Thanks. I dont really know how to do that stuff with ezdrummer though, so I'm out of luck atm unless you or someone else can help me. Alright, I figured out the drums. Yet another update: SoundClick artist: Bobby Lopez Metal - Heavy Metal UNSCARED "...The person who has nothing for which he is willing to fight, nothing which is more important than his own personal safety is a miserable creature and has no chance of being free unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself." -J.S. Mill "The difference between a successful person and others is not a lack of strength, not a lack of knowledge, but rather a lack in will." -Vince Lombardi Last edited by B Lopez; 11-30-2007 at 07:38 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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smueske ss.org Regular Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Midwest Posts: 591 Thanked: 6 Feedback Score: 0 reviews	That's a huge improvement! Now get some bass in there and you'll be whooping some ass! Steve

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