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Old 05-14-2008, 09:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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So I have a couple of songs that im working on, a few points:

1. Specifically made with other musicians in mind, IE - There are actually drummers out there that could do it. I usually dont write with restrictions on other instruments, but im doing it with people in mind.

2. Trying to do a style that kinda hasn't been done-ish. I don't want it to sound like meshuggah just because it has polyrythms.

3. I'm keeping it simple, its mainly about groove.

4. I wrote them in a similair style so they would fit with one band.

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Old 05-14-2008, 05:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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There's a lot of riffs I liked in there! I think you struck a great balance between technicality & groove, I didn't think it sounded much like Meshuggah at all. Now go & record it for real...

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Old 05-15-2008, 07:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice! I only downloaded the first one but there are some nice riffs. I can hear the Meshuggah influence.

That solo was kickass.

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Old 05-17-2008, 02:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice job man, I really liked the breakdown or whatever you want to call it in Riffs of Flesh....

The triplets sounding like machine gun fire...awesome
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