love the ending :P no seriously, this was reeeeeeallly low man, and cool. I agree on the lead popping out a bit. try to lower it a little and maby do a tiny dipp at around 1 kHz, you know a happy mouth visualwise. the rythm guitars has so much low evilness in them so anything that´s "clear" for example your lead, tend to pop out. but hey, its a matter of taste and you should go with what you feel is the best. cool tune
gött mos!