sounds a lot better!
really hard to explain this in English, but your kickdrum is very wide in frequency and covers most of the bassguitar territory. now if you were to separate those by making the kickdrum more thinner/"snappy" and the bassguitar (pitchshifted guitar) more "hmmpfh"-like, it would sound just as wide alltogether, but much better and distinct.
as for the riffage, nice positive, energetic sounding stuff
