The song is finished instrumentally in case anyone is interested to listen. I'm going to be doing a little mixing changes with the following in case anyone wants to give me tips how to do it or add to the list:
-Make the synth at 1:50 a little louder
-Cymbals down a little more
-The bass drums and a lot of the low end seem a little muddy and lost when things get fast
-I might do something to the bass haven't decided yet.
I'm having the rest of the band over on Saturday to record vocals to this song, so I'll probably record new guitars and bass as well.
I know that some people said the intro was a little too boring, but from the other critiques I've gotten and in my opinion, I think it works because people don't expect the metal that comes in at the end.
And I tried adding more synth throughout, but it just ended up being cliche and dumb..and I liked it better with just the little hints of synth.