thanks heaps guys
I am trying my best to just tighten up my writing style and vocals...so my goal is basically, every song, improve on the original in what i didn't like (as we all do :P), and yeh, my tone is a thing in the works at the moment, i've nearly got what i want. My vocals are gradually getting better lol someday! i may be able to sing
I was a bit nervous about this one, because i did some different things in it, your thanks and input have been noted so i know what i am doing right and what i need to fix
