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Originally Posted by darren
The whole first few minutes is a little long... i love your tone and phrasing, but i'm not liking the long noodling over a simple chord progression/riff that goes nowhere. The riff that comes in right before the solo is kinda cool... you could break up the first part with a couple more of those to get more of a verse/chorus modulation happening.
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+1, exactly what I was thinking when listening to it.