Originally Posted by Dragonfly
...I would still like some feedback, 'cause I'm not totally sure what to do next.
And I will love you forever if you're able to give me some directions on what to do next to get this song to 'the next level'
A very interesting start on your backing track. I'm confident that the strong and compelling melodic voice, which I'm sure you will eventually add to this, will do it justice.
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