I really like your guitar tone. I dont think that needs to be changed at all. the drums are good, but have that dfh sound (not much you can do there) I would suggest bringing them up overall and increasing the volume of the kick and snare on the kit. If bringing them up is causing you to go over 0db then slap a limiter on em and/or compress em. The song is really cool with the thick guitars and the arpegiation going on. One prob with the guitars is at some points you sound a little out of time, but nothing huge. also i cant say i like the abrupt end but this IS a work in progress. overall good job.