Awesome
I totally even forgot I posted that.
I'm not usually a writer, but once in a while I come up with something on paper like this- the last thing I had done before it everything was written backwards on the wrong side of the paper.
Quote:
Give me a reason
A reason to stay
So I might remain
For one more day
You need me for this
You need me to thrive
I need to live
I need you to try
Try to learn
There's so much you need to know
Try to practice
Your execution is subpar
You need me
I need you-
To be what I know you can be
To see what could become
Refix your gaze
Shallow sighted eyes
Left blind to your surroundings.
Hurry now
Refocus yourself
The sun is soon to rise
You must lead yourself now
I can't stay much longer
You must find the path
I pray you stay safe
Inquiry as to your path
Lost in a dangerous place
Your senses betray you
Light is dark
Warmth is cold
Pain is comfort
Fear is temptation
I've come to save you
Save you from those lying eyes
Your refusal reaffirms previous assumptions
Let me guide you
I take your hand in mine and make my leave
Stopped short
You haven't moved
Then I ask myself in hushed tones
Can I carry her
Nay- the journey is too long
We'd both be lost
Sunset is near to break
I must go now
Pray you find the way
I will not return
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You've got your head down
You've got your eyes closed
You look so pitiful now
Your body encrusted with ash
Breath heavy with toxins
Hair singed and matted
Clothes frayed and burnt
You are left with nothing
Last edited by OzzyC; 06-08-2008 at 02:04 AM.
Reason: Automerged Doublepost